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You're too close
Too close for comfort
Get away
Get away
I don't need your help
Stay way from me
I'll only hurt you
Not just once
But many times
Til' you feel broken
Just like me
Leave me alone
Leave me alone
I can't stop
It's uncontrollable
In the end
I'll kill you
Slowly and painfully
I'm sorry
I'm sorry
I don't want to
To hurt all of you
Like I hurt myself
But I want to stop
Though I really can't
Make it stop
Make it stop....
Please...
.....I am a monster........
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:iconnayaselenia:
NayaSelenia Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
if you're a monster, I'm one too
want a hug?
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:iconthelonleyfallenangel:
TheLonleyFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes please! (>*n*)>
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:iconnayaselenia:
NayaSelenia Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:tighthug:
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:iconthelonleyfallenangel:
TheLonleyFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrubcheeksplz:
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Soulless-Love Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
I really like this. The repetition is used very well, and makes the tone come off more desperately and real.
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:iconthelonleyfallenangel:
TheLonleyFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! ^.^
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Soulless-Love Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :D
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:iconthelonleyfallenangel:
TheLonleyFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Student Writer
Hug?
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TheLonleyFallenAngel Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yes please...
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